flash fiction

How to Dig a Foxhole (Updated Version)

The only story I’ve ever published was accepted by Pill Hill Press (unfortunately no longer in business) into their Daily Flash 2012. At the time, I was still a WWII re-enactor (I’ll address this in another post once I’ve had time to gather my thoughts on it), and I decided to write the story below. I recently read this story again to see how painful it was and boy did it deliver. I decided to edit it to fit my current voice and feelings - the original was about 450 words and this version is about 1000 words - which is probably the worst thing a writer can do. I can more or less guarantee my voice will be different 10 years from today, but for now, I can live with this.